Time

by *rach*and*bee*   Jul 9, 2005


By rach

I only sleep beneath the rain
in hopes it will disguise my tears

and soothe the aches inside

one summer is all that i ask

for i will not live a lie

please must you never leave me

time

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  • 19 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    god damn it rachy it's britt again,i love this one , it' .....................the best poem i've read in a long time........i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    i hate when people just rate and don't comment why, so thanX to everone who comments, i really appriciate it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Hey rachel thanks and i just wanted to tell u i love ur poems too. Also that I am no longer a stoner and my poetry helps me so much. i worked through my problems the right way and u helped see the reality thank u so much I love ya
    Bridgette

  • 19 years ago

    by lindsey

    hey i liked that..But let me tell u somethin your freind does need help.and i've lost mine so dont lose her..So look talk 2 your mom or somethin and get her somewhere so she can get professinol thoughts..trust me i wanted 2 kill myself and that was the best help i've ever gottem....i'm gettin better everyday..So do that so u dont lose her like i lost mine...<3 lindsey