Caught

by Momentary Relapse   Jul 9, 2005


I run into another trap
Again I am unable to flee
Caught up inside you again
You want to change me
I am trapped and lost
Need to escape from you
Caught in your firm embrace
Breaking my life in two
You lay all those traps
That has easily ensnared me
Capturing me in a locked cage
Unable to get myself free

For some reason I don't know how to finish this. I'd like some ideas just to see what people think I should do with this. If you offer input thanks.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Nicholas Kerst

    Another great poem...i think the ending is great the way it is...leaves it off with questionability...while most great poems are written with nothing but questionability(those ones are mostly metaphorical though...but thats not the point)...its awsome...

    --Nick--

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    nice poem 5/5 keep it up