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by Wintersolstice Jul 9, 2005 category : Love, romance / i love you
I who am not worthy Will try to describe your glory: Illuminated by the sun always As if from a fairy story Hair like polished bronze With a wave and natural hold Eyes nocturnally large, Deep hazel with lightning gold Skin pale like milk, yet tanned Alight with the suns essence Lips pink, moist-a rain soaked rose You grace us with your presence Tall yet lean, your clothes are cool But they try to mask your complexion No use. Indeed you are so beautiful Royalty should bow to you-perfection If you ask me to describe an angel I would not pause to think it through Because, it is true-no question I'd answer with one word-You.
by Emily
Wow, I love this poem! It uses great metaphors and adjectives! 5/5
by Just Val
omg...i really really liked that poem. it had so much emotion, and you wrote it really well, the third stanza was a little off though cuz the rhyming but hey i loved it either way! 5/5