wow! really good...<5>

aww so sweet you did a lovely job on this poem i been there know the feeling and you showed it so well keep it up 5/5

Beautilful poem my lady, beautiful...5/5

very sweet...i think the first line should say "I wish I could..." (could instead of can)....other than that, great.

xxx

great poem!! i know how you feel!! 5/5

Christy