Great poem, very diffretn.. I can see the pain as i read the poem.

i loved it....keep writin..if ya git a chance check out sum of my poems...

damn looks like you got most of your poems tooken care of i really like this poem though

I loved this poem.. very heartfelt.. im sure you have been through alot... good luck and keep on writing

awww wow, this is such a touching poem, it really hits the heart!!!

Lucy***

Positive poems are always a good read.
Liked this poem...4/5

Awww that was lovely, i really liked it :D

awesome poem. good emotion and rhyming

oooh wow, i loved this poem, its really true!!!

WOW! This is so deep and beautiful! Loved it!
5/5!
Much love...<3
~*hAiLy*~

this was a very good poem and has a truthful meaning great job!

Thank you for your c/r

-Josiah

Well, it's certainly an interesting idea. Sort of like a guardian angel who is always there watching over you.

Hey i really liked the poem it was really good and well written.. although it should just be drown not drowned lol its ok we all have those problems sometimes.. i'm sure i have many of them.. but none the less it was still good... bye bye EJ

hey your poem was really well.. it was written very nicely but i found one mistake.. it should be drown not drowned lol.. its ok we all have our mess ups i'm sure alot of my poems have them!! lol.. still good though.. bye bye EJ

this is just amazing...tha love you have for somebody that isn't there anymore but you treat them like they still are...thats beautiful...nevr change tha way you write you really shout start to oublish these because they are phenomenal...5/5...keep in touch gurl

I kinda got confused towards the end... but besides that it was a good poem...very touching...nice job..luv yas mwah

-kayla-

That was very well written! the flow was there and it was great! i like the whole id ea of it all too! 5/5

Aw did one of your friends really die? thats so ssad....great poem..5/5

I think this gave off a really good feeling i didnt understand the second half of the third stanza but it is probably person really good job 5/5

Nice poem sorry to hear this i hope ur ok 5.5