Wow, this poem is amazingly beautiful. I understand not believing in god. It's hard to say what I believe in as well....

But on the bright side, great poem hun!

not sure i understand but its still very good, great flow to it and yeh it was excellent like urs always r, i didnt notice anything at all off, an excellent peice of work hun xxx

So beautiful, Toni. You're so sweet for writing this....and every stanza captured my attention everytime! And I'm sorry to say, that I don't really know if there is a god either, but in a world like this I've got to hope there's something better after life to justify the pain I'm going through in life. I know you're having a hard time too, but I'm here for you! Great poem, hun!

~Sierra

Wow so sad and beautiful at the same time, very well done!!!

*Love Sabrina*

So much emotion *hugs* i can see its hard hun.. I'm so sorry *hugs* we're all here for you :-) Take care hun xxxx

You put a lot of emotion into this poem and it flowed really well... it is very easy to visualise how much you are hurting - great poem. take care x

Great poem! Every single poem you write is amazing and through all the emotion and detail you write about, I can feel your pain.

Hope you're Ok, Stay strong.

All my love,

Shell xxxx

very emotional and excellent. flows perfectly. keep on fighting hun, lu -x-x-x-x