Okay oops lol i feel SO STUPID lol i didnt know there was two pages wow im dumb i typed that thing twice....i am so incredibly stupid sorry for taking up so much space lol my mistake ahh

Omg so sad...5/5

Wow that one was really just wow, you;ve got a gift hun

5/5 /5 /5 /5 /5 / lol srry
I wish I could write like that

Awww... that was terribly sad, yet beautiful. Written so well.. You are a great poet, keep on writing.

Saiya

I commented on this poem b4...but since now i read it again...o my god...it became one of my fav poems. i think what u wrote is very true...and u have been hurt in the past very much...5/5 and i wish that i can write like that...5/5
kisses
w/b

That was extremely sad, and extremely well written. Very tearful.

Good Writing!
beth

Its so sad x.x;; i want to cry now...
its funny how much a ring can represent x.x;; i guess i should be happy my boyfriend didn't do that.. instead he jsut tried to flush my ring down the toilet x.x

WOW i loved it this is my favorite stanza

Nothing but a ring
lie in the cardboard coffin
helplessly it shone
so dead and forgotten.

it just really stuck out to me.. overall i thought the poem was beautifully written.. there was a couple spots that lost me.. but other than that i thought it was an excellent poem 5/5 keep it up

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Awee this one is really good its realyy said thoughh. its written really good i thoughtt. keep it upp!

Apart from the on of rhyming it was really good and well layed out the stanzas you put your words in fitted perfectly big thumbs up :P:P xxx alex xxxx