this is a great poem. wish everyone could see how truly senseless was is.

*cries* That was really sad... But it was also really good. Describes our situation pefectly.

Really heart felt
Very sad indeed
A real pleasure to read ..and its inspiring too
a poem too which most people can relate
cant wait for some more poems
x

Woweeeee...that is a wondewful poyem melmel. why did you not tell me ya writ it? i know it, all them po' boys fitting our wars. i thank you just got a love fo' imagimatation or howeva ya say it. well guhl i'ma letcha go now, i be thankin you fa' writtin it. touched my heart, sho' nuff. love yo' great aint tessy