Heart Broken Cutter ( Need a better title)

by Amanda   Jul 10, 2005


See blood,
Relieving pain,
See scars,
Feeling shame,

Miss pieces to the puzzle,
Watching memories as they fade,
Thinking about how you broke my heart,
And reaching for my blade,

See the blood run my wrist,
And the tears roll down my cheek,
No longer will I feel this pain,
Back to my knife is were all creep,

Press a little harder,
Pray to leave this earth,
Scars along my wrist,
Ive lost all self-worth,

And as time passes by,
I become more and more naive,
The room becomes smaller,
Its getting harder and harder to breathe,

I think about my life,
Asking why my heart was broken,
With my head in my hands,
Only left with words unspoken,

You've left me with my arm to bleed,
And blood left on the floor,
Now you see why my heart was broken?
Because you left me wanting more.

Not my best work but please comment and vote it would mean a lot Thanks, Manda

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  • 19 years ago

    by AnorexicDream

    wow that is a great poem thanks so much for the comment and i dont think that it is stupid that u have been waiting for a guy for 3 years if u truly love him then there is nothing u can do about it and if people say that u are stupid for waiting tell them that he is the one u love and u dont want anyone else i have been waiting for drew for like 3 or 4 months i just feel so incomplete without him well i feel like u can totally relate to what i am going through and if u ever need someone to talk to if u have aim my sn is AllOutOfLuck13 and my e-mail is crimsoncutter@yahoo.com u can e-mail me or IM me anytime i will always be open and try to understand u. and once again thanks so much for the comment i am glad that u liked it.
    love always
    amadna
    ps im always here for u to talk to!

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    Hey this poem is really well written! LUVZ IT!....u got talent!...Keep it up!

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