I'm too tired... Good work! :-)

good poem, i enjoyed it alot...keep writing!

good writeing.... I will check back when you have more

nice!!! well done! please check mine! i found your name on the forum!!

I liked the creativeness in this poem. I think that the 3rd stanza takes away from the poem though! The over use of the "I" is what I think takes away the beautiful picture you were painting in the readers mind. Keep in mind that's just my opinion. Other than that small thing you did an amazing job! Take Care! Brooke~

In honesty I prefer your first poem but this one is still good. Looking forwards to reading more of your work and I have put you on my fave list.

well presented. I enjoyed reading it.

hmmm.... not my favourite - i must admit, but still good :)

emma x

wow... im speechless...

All of it was good but the line that caught my attention was nothing but:
-Laughter awakes the birds-
Your use of the word ‘laughter’ here seems very good to me. After all, a little laughter does awake everything and everyone. Doesn’t it?

Marjan

PS. And don’t hope for tomorrow to be better. Just WANT it to better, and it will be.