I really liked it. Although it was long it was worth reading.Gr8 Job

Very interesting. I like how it makes me think, and I also like how it's not full of cliches. You wrote a unique, good poem and I am proud of you. (I just finished critiquing a very very ununique poem and you wouldn't believe the relief I felt when I read your first stanza.)

Your poetry may not be the kind I would generally like, but it's still just as well written as my kind.

To say the forbidden words in the world of honest critiques, "Keep up the good work".

;)