So glad you submitted something new! You have such great flow in your work. I thouroughly enjoyed this piece. It is very hard to mend a broken heart, but in time possible.

wow, eerie i love it! kee writing, your poems are great!

if only we all could have what we once had or to be how we once were with that special person . . . everyone would be so much happoer . . .if only
xoxox samara

I'm sure many of us out there can relate to having a broken heart ... and it sucks. Excellent poem. Keep it up.

Great flow. You are a good writer, i am lookin forward to more pieces! Thanks for your comments!

well done...many can relate to your words...

Thank you very much for the comment...glad you like that poem...I've decided to leave it as is....you take care too...thanks.

xxx

wow i found that was most moving... and am looking foward to reading more of your work..

NK

Liked it. Got into the mind of the narrator. The story allowed it to be an overall poem everybody could get into. Good job.

WOW, that was so beautiful i know so many people can relate to this poem. It has a real smooth flow. Excelent job!