Were ever you come up with these poems, keep them comming. yet another beautifully, thoughtful poem that has blown me away...I can honestly say, I think you will definately get somewhere with your poems.

thank you thank you thank you!!! i really really hope w can get in more contact honestly, you seem like the kind of friend everyone needs!!!

wow! what a great poem 5

The second last verse made the whole poem basicly. It started OK and then just took off towards the sky. The rhyming and the beat you put into it shows that you're accurate and you know what you're doing. Exelent job!

i love it..but its sad that its quite true

i love alot of your poems they are amazing they have this thing that makes it unique great write
take care
HS

cool thats really emotional and well described

That's an awesome poem.
The feeling really gets into your nerves and it was all easy to see in my head, but it's hard to imagine things like that actually happen. ._.