Alone in the rain

I love your writing style. I feel what your getting at and i Know exactly how you feel. It had very vivid imagery. It was truely good. I look foward to reading more of yours.

I feel insignificant leaving you a response after all these other ones...
i really loved this.... and all i could think about was what i would give to meet the person in your poem... because i have many painfull lonely nights like this... and it's so hard to face it thinking that there isnt any chance of you glimpsing someone going through the same thing....
you really had me feeling alot when i read this.... you have a way with words.. you really do....

love your work, and i will most definitly keep reading...

dont forget about me,
phil

I like how you use simple words to convey deep emotions. I like it because I think a lot of people tend to try to use large complicated words to emphasize their point; but often it has an opposite, cliche, effect. good poem! 5/5

-steve

Very sweet yet depressing but your showing deep emotion which is a huge talent when it comes to poetry your talent excelled in this piece keep it up plz comment and vote on some of mine

wow i can feel the pain that you have in side. the emotional you put in it. i like that you didn't the readers that much information. it makes us think of why this person is so sad and depressed