I thought it was great it hd a nice flow 5/5

Beautiful. I liked all the comparisons they worked well. For some reason the ending seemed to loose the flow of the rest of the poem. This is not good as the ending is the main point of the poem. Overall though, it was good.

Oh yeah, you said you'd comment on two of mine now. Please read "There go the flying pigs" and...you can choose another one.

Thanks.

Beautiful.. your very talented

Awwwwwwwwww thts soooo cute. very sweet so many love poems but ur was diff. good 5/5

Hey I like this poem alot it flows nicely too it's really cute
Carolina

I'm not much into love poems...but this one I must say, is very very sweet. You're an excellent excellent poet, wonderful job.

Sheena

This poem is excellent, so cute too. loved it 5/5.

Very good work! Short sweet and to the point! loved it!

Love
Haily

Another good one! 5/5 Loved it! By the way thanks for that spelling correction lol it was supposed to be accept lol
Becky
xoxo

I love the emotion of this poem. it was great...it reminds me of two friends i once had, shortie n pico. :) lol their real names are ashley n manuel, but this reminds me of them so much, and all the things we've been thru...and it makes me wish they still loved me! this was amazing, and i hope that some day, someones going to love u as much as u can love them...

this was a great write....

5/5

Amazing poem! you can feel the love as you read the lines. keep up the great work!
crystal

This is a greatly written poem.. I can tell you must have written many poems
Its truly an amazing poem.. Great poem!

I like this alot . keep up the good work. it was good.
Emma5/5

That was tender and sweet!
it had the innocent ring of a first love, very nice!

Good Writing!
beth

Amazing job keep up the lovely work. i enjoyed reading both of your poems.

This was beautiful, I love how all the little things remind you so much of the one you love, and I like how you incoporated this into your poem. You're structure is persistant also, and it's a very easy read. Great job with this hun.

Take Care,
Renee

The flow is perfect. Easy to read, amazing. Loved it. Great work
Sarah x

It was a beautiful poem! GRAT JOB!

Another good 1 lol dayum ur stuff sounds better then mine...lol...im hatin now lol jp