BOoK Of SeCreTz

by stephyG   Jul 10, 2005


Please read and comment its not long!! love you!

she made herself a promise
to protect her heart
for she had been in pain
since the very start

every time a guy came along
she thought he was Mr right
trust and tell him everything
and love him day and night

how wrong she always was
as it always ended the same
He would be the player
and she would be his game

she wanted to feel free
from a world of cruel intentions
of feeling regret and sorrow
from fake guys and emotions

so she lit a candle of red
for red resembled love
placed her body into the bath
and wrote in the book above:

this is the book of secrets
this is the book of lies
which shows my deepest feelings
as a result of every guy
who never gave a dam
or looked into my eyes
to see i really hurt
to see the tears i cryed
to maybe understand
i don\'t deserve what will be
and its you being unfaithfully
thats caused what will happen to me

she drops the book of secrets
the red candles still burn bright
the water begins to turn red
as she holds her wrists very tight

she takes one last breath
the candles burn with no sound
she slides under the water
where the book of secrets will be found.

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  • 18 years ago

    by creeesta

    You are truely talented. I read one of your poems and can't stop reading the other ones. I love your style of writting and how everything seems so real, like you are the person in the poem (even though i know that all your poems aren't about you). You definatly belong in my list of favorites! Thanx for the comment on my poem. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by LeXi

    i LOVE it!!! its THE BEST! omg! i cant get over how awesome this poem is! XoXo 4evr, LeXi (if u have time, it would b rele cool if u could rate some of my poems... thx!)

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow another brill peom gal! only thig i cud suggest is puttin holds each wrist tight instead of the last line on 7th stanza cos think it struggles to flow. hope u dont mind me saying. other than that its excellent! well done
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Broke&Lost

    Another great poem.
    So sad but very good. 5/5 Keep it up.
    Jenn.

  • 19 years ago

    by toni rossetti

    i tryed to vote but it says i aready did and i hadn't. i would of vote good, i like it very much it flows and tells the story well keep up the good work