by stephyG Jul 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Please read and comment its not long!! love you! |
by creeesta
You are truely talented. I read one of your poems and can't stop reading the other ones. I love your style of writting and how everything seems so real, like you are the person in the poem (even though i know that all your poems aren't about you). You definatly belong in my list of favorites! Thanx for the comment on my poem. :) |
by LeXi
i LOVE it!!! its THE BEST! omg! i cant get over how awesome this poem is! XoXo 4evr, LeXi (if u have time, it would b rele cool if u could rate some of my poems... thx!) |
by Lil Luce
wow another brill peom gal! only thig i cud suggest is puttin holds each wrist tight instead of the last line on 7th stanza cos think it struggles to flow. hope u dont mind me saying. other than that its excellent! well done |
by Broke&Lost
Another great poem. |
i tryed to vote but it says i aready did and i hadn't. i would of vote good, i like it very much it flows and tells the story well keep up the good work |