Absolutely beautiful Shelby! I loved the "shackles and chains" idea that was brilliant! This is your best poem so far! Look foward to reading your next poem! Take Care! Brooke~

that was very good. Kinda sounded like a country song, but it was very good and creative.

Shelby, this is so very beautiful... one of your best writes. Keep the faith.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

This poem has a beautiful meaning to it, so I really like it. The flow in the first stanza could use a little bit of work, but over all it was very good too. Keep writing and living for the Lord.
~anne~

yeah, thanks lord.
that was beautiful.
Lord is AMAZING.
much love,
marjan

absolutely incredible. one of the best
poems I have ever read.
much love,
marjan

A very uplifting write...truly enjoyed...

Love Ann