by Wintersolstice Jul 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Discussing events that may take place 1 year in my future. When, after my final year of school, I may never see this guy again. |
by SuperJenius
DITTO |
by SuperJenius
DITTO |
by Empty Space
oh I really like it! it's like I read it in slow motion and the words echoed in my mind....pretty captivating. |
This is nice - Im not normally a sucker for love poems ... BUT.. I actually really enjoyed this, it isnt another "Im so madly in love" poem and it doesnt portray things as perfect because thats not how things are. I admire your courage in writing something so close to you in a poem and allowing others to feel your pain and immerse themselves in it. I apologise that i cant give you any helpful critique but I couldnt really fault your work. Kp writing, |