i liked this poem |
by VictimOfLife
thats an awsome poem and so very true, you're a great writer, and thanx for the comment i personally think im the worst writer in the world,i added you to my favorites list-peace |
by Kendall
All good questions, now why can't we find a good logical reason for them? I guess thats what makes life worth living, not for the pain and the upsets, but for the strength and right to say we survived. Well done! |
by Ehsi
Kinda sad, But I liked it, very good, keep on writing. |
by NannO
gud one.. nice way of puttin ur thoughts out on paper.. i jus thot u cud 1 more line to the last stanza to make it complete, maybe add a lil rhyme to it(with bliss).. |
by Emily
thanks for ur suggestion i will and ur welcome!!! lol |
by Lisa
Seems so true, which is so sad... I have to give this one a 5.. |