by cowgirlstar26 Jul 10, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You have no idea the harm that you have done |
by Jamie
I dont think this is one of your best but i liked it anyways you have great ideas but sometimes you just cant get the flow down and rhymes are off and what notbut good job anyways 4/5 |
by Jason Meres
Little to nothing wrong with this, I love the third verse. It's like a song. |