I like this one. It is very good. You are right yours are longer then mine.

Wow this one is really different but good !!!!!!!!!!

I loved this poem!! u hav sooooo much emotion inn it. talent is rlly hardf to find but u hav got it..... i hope u are proud of this poem.... the last few lines are my fav....
love lots,
sore

Wow i loved that poem.. makes me want to cut...

Wow, spooky, great poem

your servant:
david

Nice, I like that this is completely different than anything else youve done. You arent afraid to try different things, thats good.

Damn jen. this was good as well. gave me more ideas.5/5
**harlea