With You

by Hpfan36   Jul 11, 2005


Without you....
Everything in this world appears so cruel and corrupt
I don't feel like I'm really alive
All my stress takes the best of me
I feel lost in a sea of people who don't care
No one understands me
Darkness chews me up
I feel trapped in a dark hole
Unable to come out
Lost
Lonely
Helpless
Torn and separated from the world
Like I don't belong

But then you come along...
I take your hand
You help me out
You help me see the light again
You save me

With you...
I feel alive again
And nothing else in the world can pull me back down
I feel free
Withered blossoms and roses surrounding me come to life
The dark cloud hovering over me disintegrates
No longer do I feel so alone
Or lost
No, not with you
You bring life into me
With you everything in my world brightens up
With you...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Azurite King

    Excellent poem! Once again, you've shown us your talent of being able to use very creative words in very creative ways! Keep it up.

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