this really touched me i love it so much i am so sorry you haev to go threw this 5/5 and keep it up darling!! thanks for the nice comment on my work !! taht isnt so great lol !!~stay strong~

Like the idea with the police, Have not read anything like this so far. Sad read. X

Aww, This is so sad, But so good! Excellent writting!
Lve Always
Allison

that was really good, and i tried adding part two to my poem but it didnt let me cause it was too long. but i can email to u or sumthing if u wanna read it.
well good job on the poem and ill ttyl
~amber

wowowowowowowowowow very sad like poem, keeeeep writin...=D