The Girl and The Boy. .Continued

by Iyla   Jul 11, 2005


The girl said:

But i love to walk in the rain
because no one can tell how hard I'm crying,
and they cant see the pained look on my face,
or see how fast I'm dieing
i don't want anyone to worry
worry about me if i die
and i want you to know
i will always be by your side

The boy said:

but i do see the pained look
and i do see you crying
and i recognize your lonely look on your angel face,
i love you
don't leave me in this place
i worry about you
i worry about you all the time
please don't leave me
i would die without your love in my life

* not as good as the first.. sorry*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    Another amazing write.. I love how you start off the poem and then end it.. 5/5 none to less.. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne