Good write, deserving a modest mark. Oh and thank you for your comment on my song, hope you come to look at more of my collecton I've added since then. I value ur input as you value others heheh.

wow your poems are really really good
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Wow, great poem. i wish i could fly free but u probs noticed from ma poems i cant. well i think this is a great poem i can relate to and thanx for the comment!!! take carexx5/5

I love it. Running Away from all of it. Just letting it melt away. How wonderful would that be? Excellent!!!!

Amz xxxx