Very nice...the flow was amazing!! I'm like shocked right now, Car....wooooowww....Awsome hun!! Just....it makes me wish I had thought of that before I cut.....I guess it's pointless to wish that because there's nothing I can do, but still, the thought is brilliant and positive and very influential!! Great one, hun~you're such a great role model!

~Sierra
_Meatball Hoagie#2_

woah! nice poem.. i don't know how to describe how good it is!

Oh Car, this is a beautiful write, so honest and positive. Writing is definitely a wonderful way to get out all the hurt and pain and although crying leaves us with red swollen eyes for a little while, I'd rather have my tears falling than to have all that suffering pain locked up inside. Beautiful and heartfelt. And keep on writing.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

wow... im speechless...wow... i love when you say

"The ink stains my paper
Like my problems stain my heart
And like the scars on your skin
My words are a work of art"

...very nicely said. i really like the message of your poem. keep up the amazing work!
-xXx-

wow...i love that! great job!! so good!

Thanks, guys... Fighter, that was my favorite verse, too. thanks again!

i'm sorry for everything, car... i'm so sorry. i dont want you to feel bad cuz of me, k? i'm not worth your pain

holy crap car!! this poem is freaking awesome!!! i love it!! keep it up girl! 5/5!!!

*jenny*

frick that was such a good poem! im glad you dont resort to cutting when you are down! very very good poem 5/5 and thanks for commenting on mine!

that was an awesome poem ur great azt writing poems and i can relate alot to that poem i'm not a cutter cause i put my feelings on paper

keep writin and always write from the soul,
$he//-y

to tell u the truth i have felt like cutting myself but thought other wise. this poem that u have wrote touched me in a way i never new before. now i dont think back and wonder how it must have felt like but i will use my words so that ppl see i hurt just like everyone else. thank u soo much, u have saved me and u didnt even know it