this was a good poem. good rhyming

Nice Poem I Liked It Keep Up The Good Work!!

Understad how much you care for this person, You would give your life for him right? He's part of you, actualy he is you. Well expressed through this poem. Deep and well thought out. X

You don't need anyone's suggestions to make this better. It's perfect. So heart felt and sweet! Excellent write.

There is one minor thing I'd suggest...just that you don't really need the commas after each line.

What a wonderful poem! :) 5/5

Beautifully written! The flow and rhyme was perfect. I don't have any suggestions on this poem! Nice work! Take Care! Brooke! =)

This poem is excelllent! I dont think there is anything to change it's great how it is. 5/5! And simply lovely.

hey that was a very good poem. and it is so true when you find someone that you really care about. great job. keep writing.
Crystal

omg thats soo cute!! i loved it. keep it up. also check out my poems if u get a chance. thankss

Thats good and i know how u feel gurl i have a man and i dont know what i would do if he left me.

I really like this poem. Thats exactly how i feel with my b/f Josh. Keep em coming!!!!!

Excellent poem. Loved it.

Clouds n ur Is.

this is really cute! i love it!

I love this poem almost made me cry

very sweet i liked it :)

sweet poem...the feelings it emotes are touching...nice one! :D

Wow isnt this poem amazing ???? i wonder who couldve given it any vote less than 5...clearly one of the best poems in this site !
great job ! 5/5

Hey. that was awesome. written really well. it had great rhyme and rhythm. awesome! 5/5

kelsey
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Another touching piece. Well Done

This is a really sweet poem, I love it, has a cute message, keep writing.

Awwww, i think this is my fave so far, i feel this way about someone too and i cant believe you have worded it so well. thank you for sharing your poems i think you have a very good talent xxxx