Youre poem was truthful.Except dont do it.Life youlife to the fullest.Life may not be fair.But there are some stuff that are good about it.
Love ya
Patricia xx

that was a great peom... but never ever try to kill your self bc that is hurting other people and if u don't die ur also hurting urself in alota ways.....

this is a great poem keep up the good work. i can relate. read some of mine if you want

i dont understand how a person could be hurting so badly to try to take there own life.your poems are great i mean fantastic you really have a tallent.pleeez dont try to kill yourself again.

this is GREAT i loved it keep up the great work. read some of mine if you want

wow

I'm lovin' the emotion in this. I think it's def.one of your better ones

i can relate but dont do it plz!!! mattie

i like this poem too, i can relate i tried to kill my self and slit my throat and all that got me was a straight jacket white rooms and shots which was realy scarey..

always here

<3 Emma

i've never tried to kill my self but i know what you mean just know that people do care about you!

This isn't a poem is it? You know I use to think about killing myself when I was 10. Silly aye? A sucidal 10 year old. Well I didn't and it was because I didn't want to hurt anyone else. Killing your self can hurt others more than you could ever do while you were alive. Emagine how broken up your friends and family would be. You wouldn't exsist any more but they'd still live on. I guess I see sucide as a very selfish thing to do. Try to just live your life, express yourself when you can and just try to survive. If you can and you think it'd make your feel better, get into charity, if not then don't, I'm proably much younger than you anyway.