beautifully written! nice flow, beautiful wording, and nice rhyming! good job!

Great poem 5/5 please read my poem lost soul it would mean alot thanks.
Much Luv, Manda

I think this is one of your better works!
Keep em coming!

I like the last verse best, cus it sorta explains the whole poem.
very nice job!

i loved the poem and it was a really nice peice of work.

Nice jobz

-Josiah

Wiw. The last first really gave it a final finishing. The last verse explains it all. The piece flowed really well throughout and lots of detail and emotion persued all throughout. Kat