A letter for [ h i m ]

by BECCA lessTHANthree   Jul 11, 2005



i feel like its been so long
since I've seen you last
cause after we broke up
my days.. they go by fast

they get thrown away
as i watch them go down the drain
i just sit and waste away
at yet another useless day

cause you used to be my everything
so its hard for me to move on
you were my point for living
but now my point is gone

and this probably sounds stupid,
I'm pretty sure that it sounds dumb
but you left before i had the chance
to say "I thought you were the one"

and I'm not trying to sound desperate
I'm just trying to be true
and the truth is I'm in love
and theres no getting over you..

♥ love,
rebecca

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  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    This is one of my favorites!

  • 18 years ago

    by NeSSiiE

    Omg god i love that poem its very deep
    & i like that poem
    its the same of how i feel
    a lil bit

    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffani

    Very deep poem... hun i kno how u feel! great writing P.S ull pull thru

  • 19 years ago

    by Marie

    WOW! THIS IS SUCH A SWEET POEM!!!!!! THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOO UNIQUE AND I HAVE NEVER COME ACROSS A POEM LIKE THIS! WOW IM LIKE IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM! DEFINITELY ONE OF MY FAVORITES! THAT IS SO CREATIVE-WOW!!!!! AWESOME JOB AND KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! I WOULD GIVE YOU A TEN IF I COULD!
    ~ MARIANNA ~

    P.S THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING ON MY POEM! The message was really nice, and I will try and comment on all of your poems!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    that was really good...omg i know who its about too...haha...lol well good poem...and ill see you on wed...yay

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