I thought this was an amazing poem, especially the last stanza, i loved this poem. it's dark, strange, and unique, despite it being an interesting topic a few people use, i thought it was really good to read and it flowed well with the vocabulary and the syllables because it didn't sound sing-songey or anything.

good work, keep goin.

xXx

Amazing....

I don't know if I would call it disturbing. I don't know what I would call it. It was very good though!

The poem was very good, it's just that I think when you were saying "there" you meant "they're"
Anyways, I loved it 5/5

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

I could totally relate...
wow...
keep it up cuz that was f u c k i n g amazing!
xxxx
abbye

Wicked!

You are an amazing poet!!!!

Wow..thats really good! hopefully that didnt happen to u..

Hey. ive read some of ur poems. and i think there really good.
~emS~ xxxx

I like this a lot. im just wondering if you actually scitzo or not though.

Lol no i'm not skitzo it's just a poem, can't remember what got me to right it lol

I love it. remember me a the one I wrote in 2003.

Wow! that's a sad poem...and great too.

Awesome poem. Don't take offense, but it reminds me of the movie Donnie Darko

One ? are you serious if you are message me plz

Nice

Oh my gosh, I love this piece. At first it really freaked me out, then I realized it was a poem and so yeah awesome job. Really creative and interesting.

That was nothing short of amazing! good work!

Woah this gave me the creeps o.o
but i loved it!!
awesome poem 10/10 *0*