by ...:NiKi:... Jul 11, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
She stood on a rock, |
omg, that is spectacular! i love, absolutly love it, definutly my favorite!! i like writing short stories too, and this is a five out of five, no doubt! i can'tget over this one! it's so good! it was sad, but expressed so much emotion, oh, geez, i was cought right in the story! great job!!! |
by Clarissa
interesting kinda sad, but overall it showed real good emotions. |
Interesting poem! I liked it a lot! I hope you get better abt it and i think that person is not worth it at all! Keep it up |
by tabithaa
That was sad.....5/5 |
by Ashli
very intresting! i love the story line you created! nice job! |