Thats gorgeous you contain an amazing talent I hope you hav writtien more like this plz comment and vote on some of mine an if you like my work add me to ur favs

that was a great poem. keep up the work and you should put more out that are like that one.
laura

wow, simply amazing. really, I LOVED this poem. keep it up!

roses are so decriptive..nice poem

Wow that is so powerful and such great imagery. wonderful :Dxxx

Well after reading that I have come to think that poem was about life and death....I like the connection you made...creative. Nice write!! :0

::claps:: Me likes lots. <3 5/5

Good job on comparing the roses to the commitment in your relationship..excellent!

a unique and inspired poem! i loved the idea of a black rose symbolising lost love- you definately have talent!
if you keep writing, i'll keep reading

abbi x

i like the way you used the rose to symbolize lost love. keep writting!
crystal

thx for all the comments guys
love always

Natty

orginal and good, the flow is a little off and on, but overall it was a great read. Keep writing. ^_^x

5/5 u did a really good job..keep up the great work..
luv ya,
LoVeAbLeShOrTie

"A single black rose marks the good times we had
now a single black rose marks everything sad"
I think if you changed 'everything sad' to 'everything that's sad' or 'everything that is sad' it would blend together better. I liked it! keep up the good work!

I like it, although the rhyme dont rhyme...rhyme again thing threw me for a loop. it was creative. 4/5

Inspiringly well done, the last two lines verge on brilliance.

I liked the idea of this alot

A single Black rose begins to slowly die as I lay down to sleep slowly so do I

that was my favorite stanza great job i liked this but you broke the rhyming sometimes which i thought was bad but i still am giving it a 5/5

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!1

Wow...that was amazing =) loved it 7/5! Nice job

WOW!!!! its very powerful and it means a lot to me, i love this poem and there is just to much to tell you about it just WOW!