by brittany Jul 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I love the way smile |
ahhh it's a sweet poem !!! |
by DAYLON
There a feel with this poem that you were holding back, or in a rush. It still good, but because there is sense of you holding back I will give it 4. I hope you don't mind. |
by stephanie
it ok its not as good as the rest of your work but o well ...thanks fo rthe comment it ment a lot to hear that..plz comment more and i will return the favor... |