by Nikki Jul 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Your scars were still showin when i first met you, baby, from all the pain she had caused you. you hurt, you hurt, boy did you hurt! but there i was, just fallin-love. |
by Mark
hey great poem, not critising it or anything, but would av been easier to read and better if you spaced it out more like in lines rather than paragraphs. anyway still nice poem |