Goob bye...

by "Hobo"(wendy)   Jul 12, 2005


You came to me one day
and asked me what was wrong.
Why was rebelling for not reason at all?

You said it wasn't like me,
and i said that it was now.

You said you really cared and loved me very much but now you forgot me and left me alone.

I really need you now but i don't have you any more.

I really wan to die.
I really hate my life.

I'm sorry i really love you, but now i have to go.
So i will say good bye, and assure you that i will still love you after i die.

Well this poem is not about a boy friend its about a teacher that i use to have that meant allot to me and became like my dad. pleas comment and rate.......

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~*~ Broken Green Eyes ~*~

    Very nice.. I like it.. its something you kinda have to think about ya know... anyways thanks for commenting on mine.. i'll check back sometime and i hope to see new stuff from you :)

    Kelsi

  • 19 years ago

    by Mark

    hey thanx 4 commenting on mine, and well this poems good, but needs somthing to make it flow, maybe a bit of rhyme, poems dont have to rhyme but its a good effect

    love mark xxx