I think this poem is excellent, it sounds like it just sort of flowed out? dont know if it actually did? But its so brilliant, and flows so well. I know you said u wern't sure where it came from, but it sounds like you had things you needed to vent? Ooh maybe i'm all wrong, but it is truly truly excellent. Take care you xxxxxxxxxx love u

This is amazing... its so profound and mature.. your poetry is so wise! This was excellent! I loved every single line espcially
"You're a deeper shade of desperate"
anyways hun take care:)

Wow, Well Done!!
(I'm a very big fan of your work.)

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great poem! i like it-like it! 25/5! =)

That was pretty good.

Awwwwww

Hey Ironic Allure © i havn't been on this thing for ages and your one of my all time fav's and just had to read something new you wrote and Wow its gr8 to see you havn't lost your touch ur very talented I'd gr8ly like it if you read my new one :P

It hrtz hw hdsly bad it iz.