thx for the commit. this is a great poem. im sry for wht she did to you. but ull find the right girl sooner or later

i really loved this poem i thought it was great. i can actually see this poem being read in a movie/play. i loved the way you worded it, excellent job! thanks for the comments, from what i read so far you have lots of talent too! keep it up! take care. :)