I Love You

by Ariel   Jul 12, 2005


I want you to know
A deep secret of mine
I need you to know
Because I'm running out of time.

I know you have a girlfriend
I know you love her
But there's something else
My love I can't defer.

I need you to be here with me.
I want you just as bad.
And everytime you ignore me,
It really makes me sad.

See, I'm no Kate Moss
That is plain to see
And Elle MacPherson,
Has a lot on me.

But real beauty is on the inside
And that you can only see
If you take the time to realize
And get to know me.

I know that I sound crazy
I'm not making any sense.
But the only reason is because.
My love makes me so tense.

I want you to be with me.
That is all I desire.
I want to be in your arms,
That is all I require.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Simplicity at it's best, such a touching message is brought to the reader. Some of the best poems need not be complicated to express what the writer is trying to convey. Good write.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    hey thansk so much for my comment on " I LOVE YOU but" and do you really think i shoul dmake him read it i am not sure it will do anything for him i dont know.. anyways this poen is lovely and i hope it works out and i know what you mean about "real beauty is on the inside" thats so very true keep up the good work 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by DAYLON

    I know what you mean with this poem, my friend, knew I fancy this girl back in college days and he decided to race in, and they ended up dating each other. I became the audience. I can relate to this poem, good work on capturing the moment, I love it Paul. I just written another surreal poem if you fancy taking a look.

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