wtf is wrong with u if u kill urself i am gunna blame me and i will be really pissed

good poem. i like your style in writer. good job

hey gurlie ur gettin up there u have all four awards now!!!!! he he umm i dont know if u will get this in time but umm my met is on saturday from 12-4 urr idk if u can come but if u can call my mom and yeah have fun at the wedding

i really liked it..full of emotion..great job, keep writing

Wow i really liked it that is a great poem. keep up the great work......huggs....missy

I like it... it reminded me of *if you ever read it* dracula by bram stoker.. when dracula comes in the ship and kills everyone.. then the captain shows up on shore tied to the steering... it kinda maked me think of the captain guy.. what he was going through.....yah i know i'm random

I liked your poem. It flowed together perfectly. I gave it a 5. If you get a chance check out my poems and tell me what you think

Wow! incredible poem, awesome description... this is breathtaking!!!!!!!!