i really like your poems, they have alot of emotion in them that i can relate to, and thanks for commenting on mine

Nicely written.. I loved the ending the most but overall it defiantly deserves a 5/5..

*> : PainOfOne

OOooh, very dark, very sad. I love the last verse, it's deep. You are a fabulous writer, keep it up!
Car

lovely poem...i can actually relate to this very much right now...but overall great poem keep it up!!!

A few of the rhymes soundes a tad forced but there is still great emotion in it. Very nice.
-A

~FaBuLoUs~ Your A Great Writer! I Can Kinda Relate! Check Out My Poems Sometime. DEFINATELY - 5/5!