by why me Jul 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
There was this girl |
Thats sad.. great poem though |
if that was real i feel sorry for the person.... but yeah good work erm person.... |
:( wow |
by Pilar
hey, i loved it |
I didn't really like it because it seemed just a little strange. Not because of content but the flow and word choice. They just weren't as good as you could've had it. I liked how you started out and ended though. The part: "she thought she was fat |