Bulimic

by why me   Jul 12, 2005


There was this girl
who wanted to fit in
she would of done any thing
to her it was like
a game there was no pain

she told her self
i am going to be cool
on my first day of high school

so she went to school
and made new friends
and even met a boy

but she wanted to be the best
and she even started
stuffing her chest

she thought she was fat
and nobody ever told her that
she started throwing up
all of her food

after a while
i never would see her smile
but i new something was going on
but she said it was all ok

then one day i seen it
and said to my self
o my god she is bulimic

i seen her walking in the hall
and all of the sudden
i seen her fall
she hit the ground
she was out of breath
couldn't make a sound

i seen a tear in her eye
at that point on
i new she was going to die

i started to scream
nobody was around
it was only me and her
it was after the bell had rang

all i could think of
was what to do
i was in shock
couldn't believe that this was true

please comment it would mean alote to me
thank you

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  • 19 years ago

    by Silouette Dreams

    Thats sad.. great poem though

  • 19 years ago

    by Prettiest Zombie

    if that was real i feel sorry for the person.... but yeah good work erm person....

  • 19 years ago

    by Decaying Cheerleader

    :( wow
    Strong poem
    Sad aswell

  • 19 years ago

    by Pilar

    hey, i loved it
    i hope it didn't really happen

    . . . p i l i

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    I didn't really like it because it seemed just a little strange. Not because of content but the flow and word choice. They just weren't as good as you could've had it. I liked how you started out and ended though. The part: "she thought she was fat
    and nobody ever told her that"
    Do you think that 'and' should be replaced with but? Just a thought. Oh yeah something bugs me about the next half of that. I think you might consider putting so in front of 'she started.' But you don't need to take this advice.
    ~FotF