wow great poem loved it keep up the good work hun luv kittenxoxo

this is a good poem..tahnk you so much for woting and commenting on my poem ment soooo much to me./.....thanks for the truth tooo..it was my first (try)to be poem like that thanks

i really liked it... 5/5 and thanx for commenting on my poem although it was a little confusing but i'll fix it up

hey. i love this poem i used to be bulimic but i got so skinny and i didnt want my mom to think anything of it so i stopped. good poem and ill talk to yaz lataz 5/5 keep it up

Hey, this is really good... i hope it's not true...
XxX Charli XxX ~*~

I didn't really like it because it seemed just a little strange. Not because of content but the flow and word choice. They just weren't as good as you could've had it. I liked how you started out and ended though. The part: "she thought she was fat
and nobody ever told her that"
Do you think that 'and' should be replaced with but? Just a thought. Oh yeah something bugs me about the next half of that. I think you might consider putting so in front of 'she started.' But you don't need to take this advice.
~FotF

hey, i loved it
i hope it didn't really happen

. . . p i l i

:( wow
Strong poem
Sad aswell

if that was real i feel sorry for the person.... but yeah good work erm person....

Thats sad.. great poem though