Love should be forever

by allison   Jul 12, 2005


*I was going through my room , and I found my old diary filled with poems. This was one of them. It’s from about 3 years ago. Of course the guy is long gone, but this poem will last forever. So bear with me it’s not great, but believe it or not it’s one of the better*

Wasen't that nice, Telling her you love me
When it comes to my heart, you now have the key

I love how you rave about me to all your friends
My broken heart, you have started to mend

I miss you every second, we’re not together
But when Im with you, I feel light as a feather

Remember the time we shared our first kiss
From that day on I was in love with you, that's why Im writing this

I hope forever and ever
We’ll be together
And not a day less

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  • 19 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    awsome poem. great emotion filled poem. I loved it.
    ~ItalianStallion~

  • 19 years ago

    by gasping for air

    its pretty good... not your best work... but it isnt the worst ive seen from others... so maybe if you lengthen it and put some more emotion into it it might get a five... keep em coming.. and thanks
    amanda

  • 19 years ago

    by Arora

    aww, that's so cute. <3

  • 19 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Your right! it was one of the better! very well written and i know what you mean the poem is forever! keep it up! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Very cute poem! lol