by allison Jul 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
*I was going through my room , and I found my old diary filled with poems. This was one of them. It’s from about 3 years ago. Of course the guy is long gone, but this poem will last forever. So bear with me it’s not great, but believe it or not it’s one of the better* |
awsome poem. great emotion filled poem. I loved it. |
its pretty good... not your best work... but it isnt the worst ive seen from others... so maybe if you lengthen it and put some more emotion into it it might get a five... keep em coming.. and thanks |
by Arora
aww, that's so cute. <3 |
Your right! it was one of the better! very well written and i know what you mean the poem is forever! keep it up! 5/5 |
Very cute poem! lol |