Thanks for the comments people!
Well it was about soemone, but maybe thats how you saw it, thanks for the comment any how!
Thanks
Love Always
xoxo Allison xoxo

Hey allison,
that one was awesome.. loved the rhyme scheme and you must have liked him alot. but the only thing is that it just kind of came to an hend @ less maybe go on for one more line or so.. but i dont know.. just a thought.. Anyways i liked it alot great job.

its cute! Altho i have to say you have better. I like it tho, it sounds like your talking about your first love, its cute!

Very cute poem! lol

Your right! it was one of the better! very well written and i know what you mean the poem is forever! keep it up! 5/5

aww, that's so cute. <3

its pretty good... not your best work... but it isnt the worst ive seen from others... so maybe if you lengthen it and put some more emotion into it it might get a five... keep em coming.. and thanks
amanda

awsome poem. great emotion filled poem. I loved it.
~ItalianStallion~