Radar Pain

by Wintersolstice   Jul 12, 2005


All the heat and fire and flame
Coursing through my every vein
The white hot scorching, never tame
It’s a pulsing-Radar Pain

And every time I tear my eyes away
I might have to wait at least another day
To see you. I can only hope, wait and pray
To keep the fire within at bay

Every time I even blink
All I see is you...and I think
If passions red and lust is pink
-Love is purple, to that I drink.

You are my life, my world, my air
So please forgive me if I stare
Must I pretend that I don’t care?
It seems sometimes-life’s not fair.

Every second and every hour
I wish it was within my power
Not to pine and cry and cower
As if im sweet without the sour

Starting when the doorbell goes
Keeping busy writing prose
Sleeping out the highs and lows
But I just can’t forget these woes

In my soul thoughts of you reign
But I'd never place on you any blame
For when I saw you the sunshine came
Shame it brought with it this-Radar Pain.

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  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    O' man this one was my fav by far!! It was really good! Man I am in just total awe about it there is nothing I could say to make it better! I have to say though that it is a love poem and sice there are so many of them.....you know that is probably why you got a 4.5! and not a 5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Excellent rhyming, especially when considering the difficult scheme and the repitition of the ending rhyme for both the first and last stanza. I liked the theme and rhythm of the poem as well.

  • 18 years ago

    by oldthings

    You are incredible, that's all I can say, you have a way with words and i love your poems, i' ve added you to my favorites.

    "Every time I even blink
    All I see is you...and I think
    If passions red and lust is pink
    -Love is purple, to that I drink."

    this stanza is so good, great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Purple fears and i love the same part ; really awesome write
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I really liked the flow on this one, how there is no forced rhymes and everything fits well.
    "You are my life, my world, my air
    So please forgive me if I stare"

    I really liked this stanza as it sounds similiar to what I try to say - trying to convey your feelings in a simple way without going over the top or sounding emotionless! I think you really made it work with these words.

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