great poem... Made me think, since its douffernet from the others on this site, keep up the great work... you are great...Xox Sherrie

I like the idea "Radar Pain" very creative! This poem was unique and you did a great job! ~Brooke~ =)

I agree, this is really unique. I like this part:
Every time I even blink
All I see is you...and I think
If passions red and lust is pink
-Love is purple, to that I drink
Really cool. Good work xxxx

I argee with purple Fears that part I loved the most!! and yes it really did make me think alot

Good luck and it was a wonderful poem!!

Keep up the good work!

-Josiah

You have a unique poetic style that is all your own. Adding you to my faves. 5/5.

I'm definately feeling it! Great poem!

I really liked the flow on this one, how there is no forced rhymes and everything fits well.
"You are my life, my world, my air
So please forgive me if I stare"

I really liked this stanza as it sounds similiar to what I try to say - trying to convey your feelings in a simple way without going over the top or sounding emotionless! I think you really made it work with these words.

Purple fears and i love the same part ; really awesome write
~HazE

You are incredible, that's all I can say, you have a way with words and i love your poems, i' ve added you to my favorites.

"Every time I even blink
All I see is you...and I think
If passions red and lust is pink
-Love is purple, to that I drink."

this stanza is so good, great job.

Excellent rhyming, especially when considering the difficult scheme and the repitition of the ending rhyme for both the first and last stanza. I liked the theme and rhythm of the poem as well.

O' man this one was my fav by far!! It was really good! Man I am in just total awe about it there is nothing I could say to make it better! I have to say though that it is a love poem and sice there are so many of them.....you know that is probably why you got a 4.5! and not a 5