Very good! I enjoyed it! |
Another good one. lol green hair ?!? extreme but cool lol. |
That was good..Had a serious, yet comical vibe. 4/5. Come check out some of my featured poems sometime. nice job. |
by kristen
So sad. good |
Wow...u got a tough grandma....thats bad...that she be saying that stuff about you...well i love the way you wrote this...so experienced like...keep it up and i promise you ....you will get far |
by JAY Poet
Great poem i feel the same!!!!!!!!!! |
by Little Dot
Great poem, I know exactly how you feel. Very easy to relate too. |
by Syn
Nice work... |
I feel 4 u &me both |
by Samantha
Haha i liked this one... again another i can relate to... infact im going to court on monday because my grandma is sueing me.. oh boy! yeah but haha i liked the part about your hair being green... very different... you did a very nice job with this one.. keep it up! |