Behind this smile

Seems like a similar style I saw on your other poem...I like it. I wonder if you could do more with it though... keep writing ;)

xxx

Excellent poem! i ahve also faked a smile soo many times.. jus to make other people happy.. or to try n hide my pain.. anyways great rhyming n great job!

i like i like the repeating line, it could use a little more description but it was good easy to read... good job

Simple and easily understood. Can pertain to anyone the way you wrote it. good job.

WOW! Short and to the point. IT flowed great too. 5/5
Much Love
~*hAiLy*~