Wow, another poem filled with deep feeling and emotion. You did a wonderful job on this. I can relate to it, I know how it feels to love someone who doesn't reciprocate your feelings. Keep up the writing and take care.
><> Kiesha

This seems dif to your other poems but im glad it is i like this sort of poetry but i only rarely hear it.... thanx for writting this piece...i really liked the ending.... it was touching you showing all your emotions and feelings and then that little twst, i dont kno hu this chik is but shes gota b really special for u to write about her....